ВКС «Государственная итоговая аттестация (ОГЭ и ЕГЭ). Письмо. Трудные случаи»

ВКС «Государственная итоговая
аттестация (ОГЭ и ЕГЭ). Письмо.
Трудные случаи»
Фаддеева Екатерина Анатольевна (ГБОУ
СОШ № 35)
Чекерда Елена Александровна
(ГБОУ гимназия № 24 имени И.А.Крылова)
Сирош Ольга Николаевна
(ГБОУ гимназия № 24 имени И.А.Крылова)
…I
know you had your birthday
yesterday. Where and how did
you celebrate it this year? What
presents did you get and which of
them did you like most? How do
you plan to share photos from the
party, if at all?
Oh, by the way, my elder sister
has moved to New York …
Ответы на вопросы
Where and how did you
celebrate it this year?
A) On the actual birthday we had
a big dinner...
Where and how did you
celebrate it this year?
B) I’ll celebrate my birthday with
my friends in the café ‘Night
Wolves’ on Sunday, we’ll have a
big dinner...
Where and how did you
celebrate it this year?
C) I threw my birthday party at
home. All my friends came with
presents, we danced, sang songs
and we had a lot of fun...
…I
know you had your birthday
yesterday. Where and how did
you celebrate it this year? What
presents did you get and which of
them did you like most? How do
you plan to share photos from
the party, if at all?
Oh, by the way, my elder sister
has moved to New York …
A) Yes, I can share photos, send me
your email.
B) I’m going to send the best photos
to everyone who came as it’s
a tradition.
C) Sorry, I didn’t take photos.
Постановка вопросов
− ask 3 questions about her
sister’s new accommodation
As for your sister, I’m glad to hear
such great news! Does she like it?
Do you often visit her? Did your
sister design her house herself?
Next week we’ll have a fancy-dress ball
at school, I can’t wait …
− ask 3 questions about
a fancy-dress ball
Организация личного письма
‘Well, speaking of presents I got
many books, clothes and flowers.
But I liked every gift, but the
camera which my aunt gave me
impressed me most.’
ТИПИЧНЫЕ ОШИБКИ В ЭССЕ
• подмена жанра на эссе «За и
против»
• отход от темы или
изложение выученного текста
• стилистические ошибки
ТИПИЧНЫЕ ОШИБКИ В ЭССЕ
• несоответствие/ повтор/
недостаточное раскрытие
аргументации заявленному
тезису (мнению);
• неправильное формирование
контраргументов;
• неправильное деление на
абзацы
ТИПИЧНЫЕ ОШИБКИ В ЭССЕ
• логические ошибки, в том
числе расхождение авторской
точки зрения во 2 абзаце и в
выводе;
• неумение сформулировать
проблему во вступлении;
• средства логической связи;
• несоблюдение объема
Extreme sports help to build
character.
• Nowadays a lot of people go in
for extreme sports. That is why
they often argue if extreme
sports help to build character.
Extreme sports help to build
character.
• Nowadays a lot of people go in
for different kinds of sport. Some
people claim that this is
necessary to build character while
others argue that sport is just a
hobby.
Extreme sports help to build
character.
• Nowadays a lot of people go in
for extreme sports. Some people
say that extreme sports are good
for building character. However,
there are people who are sure
that these kinds of sport are
useless occupations.
Internet is the greatest time-waster.
Internet is the greatest time-waster.
Неподвижный образ
жизни
Много ненужного во
время поиска
Соц.сети/ онлайн игры
вызывают зависимость
В ущерб полезным
делам
Поиск учебной
информации
Дистанционное
образование 2
Общение с людьми,
которые далеко 1
Дома, а не в дурной
компании
Онлайн покупки
2 абзац. 1 предложение.
А) I agree with the first opinion
about Internet.
B) To my mind, Internet does
good to people and is not a waste
of time.
C) In my opinion, there are both
good and bad points of using
internet.
2 абзац.
To my mind, Internet does good to
people and is not a waste of time.
Firstly, + аргумент. + Раскрытие.
Secondly, + аргумент. + Раскрытие.
3 абзац.
However, there are people who
suppose that Internet provides
spending too much time in front
of the screen. АРГУМЕНТ. +
РАСКРЫТИЕ
4 абзац.
Nevertheless, I disagree with the
! opposing opinion because
КОНТРАРГУМЕНТ + РАСКРЫТИЕ
ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ
•To sum up, I would like to say that
Internet is really a very important
thing in our life.
•In conclusion, I would like to state
that people spend time on the net in
different ways and it is up to them
how to use Internet.
ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ
• All in all, despite all
the arguments about the Internet as
a great time-waster, I believe that
people cannot socialize, work and
study well without the world net as it
plays an important role nowadays.
Организация эссе
Nowadays teenage students
aren’t only concentrated on their
studies but also engaged in part
time jobs. Some people support
this tendency thinking it has a
positive impact on them. The
opposing point of view is that it
results in becoming an
underachiever.
Организация эссе
Nevertheless, some people
believe that working distracts
students from studying.
Education is considered to be a
matter of their utmost
importance for them because
they should focus on getting a
degree.